Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Postcard: Saltwater Reflection

I was very fortunate with the disposable camera this day in Monterey Bay. Fortunate with the light and the angle too.














I was free diving just northwest of Lover's Point, out from the parking lot at Otter Cove. I should check my notes for that day. I tend to write up my dives while enjoying the basic bacon & eggs at the Lighthouse Cafe in Pacific Grove, but I don't have a standard dive journal to hold all such notes. I use whatever is at hand: teaching notebook, napkin, postcard, blank pages or spaces in the book I'm reading. (You'd think I'd be more systematic, but then you wouldn't know me very well, would you?) I like the loose approach. I like writing up my notes wherever and however, and the writing matters more than the cataloging or rereading.

Except in a case like this one.

Where are my notes from . . . 2006?

What book was I reading that trip? Whom would I have written a postcard to that day? Was I carrying one of the usual Moleskines? I'm pretty sure I shot a much poorer picture of a bat ray that day also, so where's the rest of the roll?

By the way, all of the water-photos I've posted so far have been taken with your basic disposable "waterproof" 35 mm cameras. I have been lucky so far, though I plan to upgrade my equipment soon. With better equipment, I just may get luckier more often, more predictably, in the best sense.

And, what's Jack Johnson's line about moving like a jellyfish?

Monday, April 13, 2009

Turtle Power: Grace Ascending

A question for my English 93 students this term:
What would Rell Sunn tell us about this turtle?

Monday, April 6, 2009

Annotations: Birkett, Blossom, Blum

As part of a research project, I have produced an annotated bibliography of 129 nonfiction texts, all associated with aquatic subjects.

Here are three more entries:

Birkett, Dea. Serpent in Paradise. New York: Anchor, 1998.

This is an annoying book that I finished more to find out about Pitcairn Island, the most isolated inhabited island on the Earth, than to discover anything more about the author. Generally, I like such a mix of autobiography, obsession, history, sociology, and adventure, but in Birkett's hands, the narrative becomes a spiteful, depressing pile of gossip and innuendo at the expense of the Pitcairn Islanders who were good enough to welcome Birkett to their very small island. Still, worth reading once to find out what has been happening to the Pitcairn Islanders since Fletcher Christian and his crew of mutineers began to populate this refuge after the Mutiny on the Bounty. Or, barely worth reading? I'm still debating that one.

Blossom, Laurel, Ed. Splash: Great Writing about Swimming. Hopewell, NJ: Ecco, 1996.

Blossom's anthology is a mix of fiction and nonfiction, actually. It's a fine collection that brings together classic short pieces (Cheever's "The Swimmer" and Updike's "The Lifeguard") with a full array of poetry and practical nonfiction all on the theme of swimming. I wish that Ben Franklin's lessons on how to swim were included also, but I know where to find that piece anyway.

Blum, Mark. Beneath the Sea in 3-D. San Francisco: Chronicle, 1997.

I love this photographic wonder: just as the title says. Whenever I teach essays regarding the ocean or fish or even just looking closely to discover truly, I bring this book and pass it around. Chronicle Books has a winner here.

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Saturday, April 4, 2009

Touchstone: Stevenson's Treasure Island

I love adventure stories, always have and always will. Homer's Odyssey, Edgar Rice Burroughs' Tarzan of the Apes, and Robert Louis Stevenson's Treasure Island have been the stories with the earliest and longest holds on me. I think the version of Homer I first read was called The Adventures of Ulysses, giving the Roman name for the ancient Greek hero; someday I'll track down a copy. Here I want to share a little about Treasure Island, particularly two moments in the very first chapter of that book.

Read the book's opening words:

Squire Trelawney, Dr. Livesey, and the rest of these gentlemen having asked me to write down the whole particulars about Treasure Island, from the beginning to the end, keeping nothing back but the bearings of the island, and that only because there is still treasure not yet lifted, I take up my pen in the year of grace 17--and go back to the time when my father kept the Admiral Benbow inn and the brown old seaman with the sabre cut first took up his lodging under our roof.

"And that only because there is still treasure not yet lifted"! That phrase always catches me, holds me suspended in the literary-present, in the now and how, as if this adventure had really only just happened, as if Jim, the captain, the squire, the doctor, and the few surviving crew had only just returned, and as if I too could join the adventure, could seek out that treasure, the treasure not yet recovered. When I was a boy, I might not have noticed why that opening sentence meant so much to me (though I just might have, being attuned to the telling--not just the plotting--from an early age). If asked, I would have pointed to the treasure, but probably also to the names, the island, the inn, the sabre cut, and even the allure of the 18th-century setting, with one thing offered after another. Glorious abundance, yes, but the phrasing of that "treasure not yet lifted" is the skeleton key to the triple lock of the engaged imagination.

Here's another passage from a bit later in the first chapter. (Though not much later. Stevenson can move from action to reflection to action as fast as anyone, when he wants to.) I give you a half-paragraph to set up the contract between (the as-yet-unnamed) Billy Bones, the scarred and domineering lodger at the Benbow Inn, and young Jim, our narrator and prospective alter-ego, and then there's the paragraph of true interest for me:

He had taken me aside one day and promised me a silver fourpenny on the first of every month if I would only keep my "weather-eye open for a seafaring man with one leg" and let him know the moment he appeared. Often enough when the first of the month came round and I applied to him for my wage, he would only blow through his nose at me and stare me down, but before the week was out he was sure to think better of it, bring me my fourpenny piece, and repeat his orders to look out for "the seafaring man with one leg."

How that personage haunted my dreams, I need scarcely tell you. On stormy nights, when the wind shook the four corners of the house and the surf roared along the cove and up the cliffs, I would see him in a thousand forms, and with a thousand diabolical expressions. Now the leg would be cut off at the knee, now at the hip; now he was a monstrous kind of creature who had never had but the one leg, and that in the middle of his body. To see him leap and run and pursue me over hedge and ditch was the worst of nightmares. And altogether I paid pretty dear for my monthly fourpenny piece, in the shape of these abominable fancies.

I first taught Treasure Island back in 1997 as an experiment. (Consider how the book now is marketed as a children's book, consider how the language of the book is somewhat dated and demanding, and yet consider the presentation of characters in action, the sustained narrative, and the payoff of pirate treasure.) As I reread this book that had mattered so much to me, this paragraph about Jim's imagination really struck me as a mark of Stevenson's quality and as, say, one finger of the grip the book has had on me. Of course, I love pirate stories in general, but young Jim Hawkins is the particular focus here. You can tell by how Jim stands up for his silver fourpenny piece each month that he's a remarkable lad, but he isn't just courageous, isn't just proof against anxiety or fear, isn't just oblivious and intent on the cash. Jim Hawkins is observant, has pluck, and holds within him both the empathy and imagination that will be the guides for his every action, though he will also suffer for those guides, those gifts. I loved that Jim had these anxious fantasies, these nightmares of the engaged spirit, because that made him more human, though still heroic, made him more like myself, and therefore I could also be more like Jim, couldn't I?

Such reflections are no doubt standard fare, the stuff of anxious therapy and reveries of childhood. I put my thoughts about these passages here to mark, for myself, their importance, and to model such reflecting. I don't discount or undervalue how most of us can tell these same self-absorbed narratives of how stories worked on us and for us; I care quite a bit about how stories shape us and how we aid and abet such shaping. How can I ask my students and my friends to read any books at all if I am not honest with myself how books may matter? Are we less susceptible, less malleable, or less open to the shaping power of narrative as adults? I think that's a question only to be answered by each of us, for each of us.

There's far more to Treasure Island than these two short passages, and Jim's arc of growth provides one good reason to read this fine book. Still, don't forget the adventure, the pirates, the parrot, the Hispaniola, chests full of pieces of eight, Ben Gunn, Israel Hands, and Long John Silver himself. Long John Silver: Jim Hawkins' strange surrogate-father; trustworthy betrayer; handy, glib, and deftly brutal. Long John Silver, "the seafaring man with one leg," just may haunt your dreams too.

Stevenson, Robert Louis. Treasure Island. New York: Signet, 1981.