Showing posts with label Sentences. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Sentences. Show all posts

Sunday, December 9, 2018

Editorial


Two spaces after a period:
Two steps to let that first thought settle before we move to a new one.


Sunday, August 14, 2011

"The Carpet-Bag": Sentence #1

"I stuffed a shirt or two into my old carpet-bag, tucked it under my arm, and started for Cape Horn and the Pacific."

--Melville's Ishmael.

Classic chapter opener; such an easy, sweeping sentence.

Melville does this again and again, but in a big book like Moby Dick, you've got to stop and just look, every so often, sentence by sentence, to feel the poise and power.